REFLECTION TASK 1B
Hi everyone! I will
introduce to you a person that you will admire because when I met him , this
man really fascinated me. When I was in secondary school, we were preparing a
school magazine, and I had an appointment this man to interview for school
magazine. Till that time, I had never heard him too. However, after interview I
learnt a lot of thing about this man. Also, he taught me how to think differently, how to be
successful and how much important doing
something fondly. Now , If you wonder
about this man, I will share his name with you. This admirable person’s name is
REHA BİLİR.
He is a really famous photographer not only in Turkey but whole of
the world as well. He was given AFIAP designation which means artist of internatioal federation
photografic art in 2003 due to
his successes. Unfortunately, he is not so much famous in Turkey. Reha Bilir was born in Konya/ Beyşehir, and
he graduated Istanbul University is pharmacy school but he has been known as a
photographer. He won Switzerland World Cup in 1999, honorable mention
in the UK in 2004, and he located in the country know the team was selected for
a total of 5 times national teams. Moreover, he won Turkey's most important
photo prestige awards Şinasi Barutçu Cup in 2008 and Sami Day the Cup in 2009.Also,
he has been awarded in 2011 by the Federation of Photographic Art as "Honorary Member - hon.fbps" and
In 2012, an award by Selcuk University Photography Society "S.Ü. Photographic Society Honorary Member
- hon.supc "was awarded with the title. He has many awards like
these, and if you want you can check out his page : http://rehabilir.com/

Hi Esma
YanıtlaSilI read your second reflection task and I want to talk about it now. First of all, I want to thank for this informative task. Everybody who has read this article can learn and understand this man easily because you expressed him clearly. All the sentences are about the same main idea.You are good at using linking words like when, till ,however etc. Your punctuations are used correctly. I find one tiny mistake in line four. You forgot uto use -s letter after thing. Apart from that I didn't find any mistake. You are good writer.